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Friday, August 6, 2021

The vibrant glossy banana yellow umbrella

This week we have been learning about empathy and we watched a short film about a girl with a  umbrella  and how she showed empathy.                       

Umbrella

Early one wintery cold day, the door to Miss Elem’s Home for Children was

opening  wide. 

The girl with the vibrant glossy banana yellow umbrella , angrily entered the

orphanage  before finding a home for her umbrella .Not wanting to be seen,

Boris quickly whipped his head around the door frame so that he was hidden

from view. Standing off to the side the girl happily looked as her old toys were

becoming new toys as the children searched in the box for hidden treasures.

The girl smiled as she watched the young girl cradle the doll like it was her

baby sister. Her smile quickly disintegrated as she looked back at the umbrella

stand and all she saw were puddles. Her umbrella beloved had vanished out of

sight  no were to be seen.


can you find the simile in my writing?