This week we have been learning about empathy and we watched a short film about a girl with a umbrella and how she showed empathy.
Umbrella
Early one wintery cold day, the door to Miss Elem’s Home for Children was
opening wide.
The girl with the vibrant glossy banana yellow umbrella , angrily entered the
orphanage before finding a home for her umbrella .Not wanting to be seen,
Boris quickly whipped his head around the door frame so that he was hidden
from view. Standing off to the side the girl happily looked as her old toys were
becoming new toys as the children searched in the box for hidden treasures.
The girl smiled as she watched the young girl cradle the doll like it was her
baby sister. Her smile quickly disintegrated as she looked back at the umbrella
stand and all she saw were puddles. Her umbrella beloved had vanished out of
sight no were to be seen.
can you find the simile in my writing?
Hi Lily
ReplyDeleteyou did a really good job on writing this next time you could not put in bold but I really liked it .
FREYA
Morning Lily,
ReplyDeleteI have just read your brilliant story. I especially like all the descriptive words that you have used. They really help me to make a picture in my head of the video you must have watched. Is this the simile Freya? "The young girl cradled the doll like it was her baby sister." What happened to the umbrella? Did someone else take it?
Hi Lily, I agree with Michelle your writing is very descriptive and I was able to visualise it in my head as I was reading. I wonder what happened to the umbrella?!
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