Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Thursday, May 21, 2020
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Wow Lily,
ReplyDeleteI love the house Idea I can really tell that you want a lot of kids. I love that you said you want a big kitchen for baking with your kids. Next time I would add more detail to your work so that really now the meaning for each room is and what is in. But over all well done.
thank you beth and next time I will
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