This week in writing we were learning about ANZAC day and our create task was to make a graphic novel about what happened a the war so here is my jamboard
would you like to be in the war if you were john
Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
This week in writing we were learning about ANZAC day and our create task was to make a graphic novel about what happened a the war so here is my jamboard
would you like to be in the war if you were john
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Hi LILY
ReplyDeleteI love your drawing they look cool and your setting sounds cool it is like I want to go there next time you can work on to make your words a bit bigger so it is easier to read .
Freya
Kia Ora Lily
ReplyDeletegreat job. This looks amazing. It reminded me about how hard it is to draw lines. Next time you could make the words bigger.
- MIa