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Friday, April 3, 2020
New Ice Cream Radio Script
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Lily, this advertisement for the radio is great. I like the way you have included dialogue (people speaking). The new flavour sounds interesting too.
ReplyDeleteYou have made a great job of this post. You could add a picture next time so we can see what the product is as well.
Wow lily this flavor sounds spictaculer and deiloius apple orange and blueberry are intresting flavor's that are not yet invented do you think you could try tell us how you created this flavor I guess all your fans want to hear. From Chydale
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